四级作文第一版（手机篇）

英语四级作文三版真题与解析 src="http://img1.gtimg.com/edu/pics/hv1/80/1/1860/120946835.jpg">

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words.

提示：这篇文章的主题可以写成“技术是否能代替学校”。

思路：第一段描图；第二段正反议论型（现象解释型）；第三段个人观点。

Technology has dramatically changed our world, stretching its legs to all walks of life. As is humorously depicted in the drawing, a boy holding a cellphone in his hand is asking his mother with great surprise. Since his phone can solve all the problems for him, he argues, is it still necessary to go to school?

Funny as it seems, this picture poses us a controversial question: “can technology replace traditional school learning?” For centuries, our Chinese have adhered to the public wisdom: school where education is provided is indispensable in our development. Nevertheless, there is a growing recognition that technology plays an extremely important role in our study, which we can hardly ignored. Nowadays, when children have questions, “baidu”instead of “teacher” will be the first to come to their minds.

To my knowledge, school learning should go hand in hand with technology. While cellphones do help in solving school problems, they cannot have answers to all the questions, such as “how to become a real man”, “how to make real friends”. Schools can shape our personality and allow us to adapt to the real world.